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I have always waited 
waited for insanity to come. 
Everything is rated
by others, but I am all alone.

...

Buying things to compensate
all the things I ever lost
All things to abbreviate
the urge of things I needed most.

...

The feeling of happiness
empathy, comprehension
is now filled with loneliness;
sadness with expansion.
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:iconsleepyweez:
sleepyweez Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Whoa! i relate much of this poem
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you..
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:iconsleepyweez:
sleepyweez Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student General Artist
no problem :)
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:iconmorphine-cloud:
Morphine-Cloud Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Featured : [link]
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you. :aww:
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:iconbleeding-magic:
Bleeding-Magic Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Photographer
:love:
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
.. :)
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:icontheshortyetevildork:
Theshortyetevildork Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
you explain such a vast feeling in a few succinct short paragraphs. it's wonderful.
but you're okay?
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
No, I am not.
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:iconsilvershinings:
silvershinings Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Hey. Talk to someone. K?
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I do all the time, and it's getting better now. :)
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:iconsilvershinings:
silvershinings Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm glad! :D It's a long road, but it's worth it.
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:iconnsolanki:
NSolanki Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013   Photographer
Nice :)
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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:iconinsolitus85:
insolitus85 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautifully written.
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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:iconinsolitus85:
insolitus85 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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:iconfruitpunch1:
fruitpunch1 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
:heart:
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
..
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:iconkeksoe666:
Keksoe666 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
interessante Ausrucksform...

Ist es sehr herzlos zu sagen "willkommen in meiner Welt"?

Egal ich hoffe, dass es dir bald besser geht
Und ganz alleine ist bist du sicher nicht

Auch wenn das jetzt kmosc klingt: wenn man was für dich tun kann dann sag bescheid, mkay?
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Dankeschön. Gefällt es dir?

Es hat sich geklärt, aber gestern wollte ich es einfach in Worte fassen.
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:iconkeksoe666:
Keksoe666 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sagen wir ich kann was damit anfangen...

und ich kann's nachvollziehen, zum Teil

freut mich aber, dass es dir gut geht ;)
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:iconryolo132:
ryolo132 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
*big huggles*
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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:iconryolo132:
ryolo132 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
if you ever want to talk about stuff, I'm sure there are lots of people that have offered this, but I'm offering it too. Send me a note, I've been told I'm very friendly and I know the feels.
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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:iconzurtus:
Zurtus Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
:icontheyfoundmeplz: beautiful!
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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:icondeviangelica-artist:
deviangelica-artist Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
beautiful
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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:iconfoureyes:
foureyes Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
:heart: :love:.............................:)
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww:
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:iconbeaucyphre:
BeauCyphre Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Professional Writer
Well done, Olivia! You don't need many words to capture a feeling, and you're saying so much. This is pure emotion, and if I could be close to you, I'd hug you now.

From a writer's point: It's a damn beautiful poem.
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you, Beau. I hope my cloudy sky clears up soon.

And once again thank you. I do usually not write poems, but it is easy when you have such strong feelings like I had yesterday.
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BeauCyphre Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Professional Writer
You're welcome, my friend! I wish you a sky with stars as bright as the sun, and your next days shall be full of joy and excite you so much.
Strong feelings always ignite important things, and your feelings gave birth to an extraordinary piece of art.
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Today we watched the sun going down, and the sun smiled at me.
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:iconbeaucyphre:
BeauCyphre Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Professional Writer
Great! Well deserved. :hug:
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:iconwolfreen:
wolfreen Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Photographer
the way to the first floor may not lead through the door !!...you dont need any special power just go around and cut some flowers :)
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dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
.. :)
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:iconhaplessbutinspired:
haplessbutinspired Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is a good poem ^^ and i quite understand the emotions in it..
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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:iconhaplessbutinspired:
haplessbutinspired Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :thanks:
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:iconbronybeforepony:
BronyBeforePony Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
what a devastating idea, to be consumed by the thing that fills you
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NoobMaster666 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
:)
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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:iconbowserman3:
bowserman3 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
eating healthy and exercising regularly made me feel better
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:icondragonfly-oli:
dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I already do that.
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:iconbowserman3:
bowserman3 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
oh ok
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BlindEyeTwist Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Wow - viel zu gut um es in Worte zu fassen :heart: - passt richtig gut grad und auch die richtigen Worte hast du gefunden, finde ich :)

Wenn du jemanden zum reden brauchst, darfst du mir gerne ne Note oder so schreiben, ja? ;)
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dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Danke.. :) Das ist echt lieb von mir, gerade weil ich nicht so oft Gedichte schreibe.

Klar, es kann sein, dass es sich heute klärt. :)
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