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Queen and King in Strawberry Land. by dragonfly-oli Queen and King in Strawberry Land. by dragonfly-oli
Time passes by so extremely quick!
I was unsure whether to upload it, because.. well.. It is not very interesting.
But I think it fits into my gallery.

:star: Featured: fav.me/d5gkug6 fav.me/d5h2scl fav.me/d5ks05o

:camera:: Nikon D5000
Lens: 50mm f/1.8 + Closeup-filter


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Critique by joesbarngrill Oct 1, 2012, 2:37:44 AM
I like this. It's cute and a bit whimsical.
If that's what you're going for, then you've achieved the goal.
ON the outside, however, a bit sharper would have helped to bring the textures home to the viewer.
Aside from a 'cute' picture, food shots can really tell a story.
I would have liked to see the cookies a closer to their real color as the red 'feel' to the whole thing, in my opinion, and this is simply my opinion, takes from the shot. By isolating the strawberries from the cookies, colorwise, I think it would have been much more impactful. (not sure if this is even a real word or not but...)
I'm not sure about the lighting. Perhaps post work? I would have like to have seen a bit more in the post work area. This would take a good picture and make it great.

So, if your only goal was to bring a smile to a face then by all means, I'm smiling, as this is cute. but, I think you could have pulled it up a couple of notches to bring it into a more serious category as a food shot.

As in all things, art is subjective so, simply my opinion.
You do good work. I think this has the potential to be great work.
What do you think?
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josephacheng Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I normally find critiques too high, but the critique here is too low!
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dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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maybe-paper-hearts Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
awww... great work. Beautiful, artistic and lovely.
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dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :aww:
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vewolff Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012   Photographer
Your delicious photo got featured: yummy, sweet and delicious. Please fav this article so that more people can see it and your photo :heart:
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dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Danke!
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Bleeding-Magic Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Photographer
I really have no idea why I didn't come across the photo sooner! I love the way the colors fit so perfectly together.
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dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :heart:
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namlunvn Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
hungry ^_^, love it!!!
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dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:giggle: Do you also like strawberries? ;)
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