I really, really like the colours and lighting in this. The composition is also good, what with part of the leaf being cut off and whatnot.
However, I feel like the focus could be better. While the colours are rad, it's a tad on the grainy side, which really takes away from the overall effect. In relation to that, the focus could be sharper, and more in depth. In other words, more "macro," especially with how zoomed in the leaf already seems to be.
So. Really great picture. Awesome colours and lighting. But the over all focus could be sharper.
cool!! barbecue sounds always funny I'll se some friends of mine playing live tonight, chinese lucnh tomorrow then studio recording then another live concert of other friends of mine and then.. sunday lazy sunday xD
However, I feel like the focus could be better. While the colours are rad, it's a tad on the grainy side, which really takes away from the overall effect. In relation to that, the focus could be sharper, and more in depth. In other words, more "macro," especially with how zoomed in the leaf already seems to be.
So. Really great picture. Awesome colours and lighting. But the over all focus could be sharper.
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